Monday 2 February 2015

First feedback

This is the video of our class mates telling us how they feel about our  opening title sequence. We are still in the editing process, so there is still sound to be added, titles and finishing touches. Since this was filmed, we have made some improvements on the colour. The colour seemed patchy because of the light, and the movement of the red. I haven't been able to fix the colour problem completely but I will continue to try and fix the colour problem. From the feedback we have considered the drowning scene and thought about what they said, but in the narrative the body was put there by the police. The look of the body (still pretty, and half dry) symbolises she is working with the police and not against them. the half wet look shows she has been there a while and has dried.


OTS first feed back from chloe carman on Vimeo.

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